Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Final Assignment EXECUTIVE SUMMARY

TITLE:                                     There’s Always Hope
GENRE:                                  Docu-Drama
TARGET AUDIENCE:            Parenthood (Working Adults)

THE DOMINANT CULTURAL / SOCIAL ISSUE FEATURED IN MY WORK IS:
Generations these days are different. Most working adults are very committed in their career and tend not to notice much of their children talents.
Is to let parents open up their mind and notice how talented their kids can be even they are autistic

LOGLINE:
Clive’s Autism life struggling through the judgment of others and finding what he yearns and hopes for his future.

SYNOPSIS:
Having Autism is not a choice but it is who they are. Clive suffers from autism and Susan is struggling from bringing Clive up. With patience and determination, Susan manages to pull through and bring Clive into the Art world.

When Clive practices his drawing into painting, he improves pretty fast. He is always interested in discovering new stuff to draw and paint. One day a poster with colors caught his attention and he brought it home. Susan found out and took time to actually guide him along with canvas painting and to allow him to join the competition. As Clive won the competition, Susan start to believe that there’s still hope for Clive even with his autistic condition.


REFLECTION PAPER
Reflection1: why i think my story will appeal to the target audience?

It’s a docu-drama that consent parents with autistic kids, I think it will help parents to understand more about their kids after watching it. Parents tend to work very hard for living expenses and didn’t notice on their kid’s talent. There’s still hope no matter what condition their kids are facing. Notice more on their kids movement and things that they do. Find out their talent and put them on that path to further their talent.

Reflection2: what i think makes a good screen story?

Key Character to bring up this character in the story. Of course the motive that I’m trying to convey to the audience must be strong.



3 ACT STRUCTURE:
ACT1 SETUP
ACT2 CONFRONTATION
ACT3 RESOLUTION

Key Character(s):
·       Clive - Brusher
·       Susan






Confrontation:
·       Teaches Clive Shapes
·       Teaches Clive Animal Play-Cards

Climax (Grand Finale):
·       Guiding Clive to paint
·       Send Clive’s work for competition

Resolution: Clive wins the first prize & his work is exhibited.

MOTIVE:
·       To realize Clive’s talent in drawing and painting





TURNING POINT:
·       Introducing drawing & painting to Clive
MOTIVE RESOLVED?
·       Love painting and drawing
·       Painted
·       Won first prize
Conflict/Obstacles:
·       Clive cuts his hair
·       Clive injures his fingers
·       Clive pushes her mother

Conflict/Obstacles:
·       Clive keep showing attitude
·       Pick up leaves to shading






Moral of the Story if any:
·       Found what’s Clive’s talent
·       Used painting as his full time career




LOGLINE:
Clive’s Autism life struggling through the judgment of others and finding what he yearns and hopes for his future.

STORYLINE
Susan is doing her chores as normal, sweeping the floor when she sees unusual amount strands of hair leading to Clive’s room. She follows that trail of hair to Clive’s room. She is shock to see a trail of blood among the strands of hair and also Clive’s favorite toys is being cut into pieces. She then looks up to see Clive is cutting his own hair and she at the same time injures his fingers. Susan rush to him and stopped Clive by getting the scissors away from him. Clive gets shock and pushes Susan and ran out of the house.

Clive walks limply down the void deck and keep playing with his fingers. Passerby was looking at Clive in a weird way. Clive’s mind starts to hear voices. He ran back to staircase to hide and squat.

Susan starts to think back, when she was at the garden sitting on the bench. She was crying and all her thoughts on Clive ran through her mind. She realized that Clive ran out of the house, she quickly rushes out to chase Clive back. Susan finally found Clive sitting at the stairs and comfort Clive. She starts crying and hugs Clive even harder than before. She brought Clive home and asked Clive to have nap. She sings songs and tap Clive to sleep; Clive drifts off to sleep right away.

When Clive is awake, Susan called Clive. She wants to teach Clive to differentiate shapes with the help of wooden blocks. She grabs his attention by holding his hand and guiding him to fit the blocks into the correct holes. Susan even teaches Clive to differentiate the animals with play-cards. Susan always have to grabs his attention and not give up on Clive. Clive always shows attitude when he is been taught on shapes and play-card. She was very patience while teaching Clive all this basic.

After Clive was familiar with those basic. Susan decided to teach Clive something he may want to learn, that’s drawing and painting. Susan makes Clive sits on her lap and guides him in drawing. This time round Clive concentrated and didn’t get distracted. Clive actually smiles as he sees the colors of the paints appear on his drawing paper. Susan feel relieved and went to do house chores. Clive pause and walks down the stairs with his finger traces along the wall. He walks towards the grass and start picking leaves. While walking back home, he saw this attractive poster on the wall next to the stairs. He tears the poster and continues walking home.

Clive reaches his room and immediately hides the poster and tries to shade the leaves overlapping way. After Clive finishes his shading, he head to bed for a nap. Susan cleans up Clive room, tidying her drawings that are left on the floor. She found the poster that Clive brings back and it was an art competition. When Clive awake, he continues with shading. After awhile, Susan calls Clive for her attention. When Clive walks out, he sees Susan placing canvas and painting materials on a table. Clive smile and walks towards Susan. He sits in front of canvas and Susan guides him to paint slowly.

After Clive finished the painting, Susan actually wrapped it and sends for the competition. Months pass by quickly and Susan opens her letterbox and glad to receive a letter from the competition organizer. In the letter state that Clive painting won the first prizes and it will be exhibit at the gallery. By then, Clive used painting for his full time career.












Comment By Louis: Make more dramatic, put more sad feeling to make people more into the sad emotion of your story. 

Sunday, March 16, 2014

The Executive Summary - Draft

The Executive Summary

Title
There’s Always Hope

Genre
Docu-Drama

Target Audience
Parenthood (Working Adults)

Key Message
Is to let parents open up their mind and notice how talented their kids can be even they are autistic

Logline
Clive's Autism life struggling through the judgment of others and finding what he yearns and hopes for his future.

Synopsis
Having Autism is not a choice but it is who they are. Clive suffers from autism and Susan is struggling from bringing Clive up. With patience and determination, Susan manages to pull through and bring Clive into the Art world.

When Clive practices his drawing into painting, he improves pretty fast. He is always interested in discovering new stuff to draw and paint. One day a poster with colors caught his attention and he brought it home. Susan found out and took time to actually guide him along with canvas painting and to allow him to join the competition. As Clive won the competition, Susan start to believe that there’s still hope for Clive even with his autistic condition.

Character List

Key Character
Clive – Brusher

Supporting Character
Susan





Research


Reflection Paper
Reflection 1: Why I think my story will appeal to the target audience?
It’s a docu-drama that consent parents with autistic kids, I think it will help parents to understand more about their kids after watching it. Parents tend to work very hard for living expenses and didn’t notice on their kid’s talent. There’s still hope no matter what condition their kids are facing. Notice more on their kids movement and things that they do. Find out their talent and put them on that path to further their talent.

Reflection 2: What I think makes a good screen story?
Key Character to bring up this character in the story. Of course the motive that I’m trying to convey to the audience must be strong.


3 Act - Summary:

Act1 -
Clive likes drawing on the wall and not knowing how to differentiate between safe and danger.
Clive likes trying out new things to draw on & anything that is related to colors and art will gain it attention.

Act2 -
Clive draws on the wall and Susan lost her temper, scolded and hits Clive with drawing blocks. Clive ran to a corner and squat, biting his fingers.

Act3 -
Susan decides introduces canvas to Clive and start to teach Clive how to draw and paint on it. Clive’s work even won award and was exhibited. 

Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Shortlist ideas from brainstorming and logline

A kid that has an autistic spectrum. 

Logline

Clive's Autism life struggling through the judgement of others and finding what he yearns and hopes for his future.


BRAINSTORMING IDEAS FOR MY ASSIGNMENT STORY

Issue
I want to tell a story about a kid that has an autistic spectrum. 

Related To Target Audience

Is to let parents open up their mind and notice how talented their kids are even they are autistic. 


Key Character
Clive is a quiet boy and only live in his own world. He is very talented in art and very good in numbers. 

Logline
Clive's Autism life struggling through the judgement of others and finding what he yearns and hopes for his future.




STORYTELLING FOR YOUR TARGET AUDIENCE

- Young Adults / Adults

--- Friends
--- GI JOE
--- The Big Wedding

- Demographics
--- Male & Female
--- 18 - 59
--- Caucasian

- Psychographics
--- Lifestyle
---Hobby
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- Teenagers

--- Harry Potter
--- Lord Of The Rings
--- Spider Man

- Demographics
--- Male & Female
--- 13 -18
--- Caucasian

- Psychographics
--- Interests
--- Hobby
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- Pre-School

--- Ben 10
--- Barney & Friends
--- Mickey Mouse Club House

- Demographics
--- Male & Female
--- 3 - 6

- Psychographics
--- Language Ability
--- Love Song & Dance
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- Elderly

--- Taiwan Series
--- Opera

 - Demographics
--- Male & Female
--- 60 >
--- Dialect

- Psychographics
--- Lifestyle
--- Interests
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Wednesday, February 5, 2014

A Location

Shawn was all ready for his plan to propose to Sally for a marriage. He planned this propose a long time ago and this day finally arrived. He prepared everything and even booked a private room at Marina Bay Sands with sea view which both of them always wanted to book and experience the stay there. It was one of the unusual places that they will go on a date.

It was a working day for Sally and Shawn was on leave. So Shawn had the whole morning and afternoon to prepare the stuff for his propose.

He did mention to Sally; “I will fetch you earlier from work since I’m on leave today.”

Sally didn’t suspect anything and just head to work happily. While she is working, Shawn quickly went to get everything that was needed for the propose at night. He went to check in at Marina Bay Sands and brought the stuff up to the room to set up the room with red and pink roses, candles to make the scene as romantic as he could. He even arranged with the hotel management to cater for room service candle light dinner, as it was a full propose package that he prepared for Sally.

After preparing all the stuff, time was almost up to fetch Sally from work. So when Shawn arrived at the office lobby, Sally quickly got into the car.

She asked; “Where are we having our dinner?”

Shawn replied was, “Just relax yourself and we will arrived at our destination for dinner in awhile!”

When both of them arrived at Marina Bay Sands, everything was kind of high class and Sally was wondering what she would be having for dinner. Suddenly, Shawn blindfolded Sally with a black cloth and slowly went up to the room. Before they even reached the doorstep of the room, everything was prepared for Shawn propose to Sally. Once Shawn opens the door and the tune of the romantic song started to play. Sally was kind of wondering what was going on. Finally when Shawn put Sally down to sit on the comfortable chair, the cloth was taken down and she got a shocked.

While waiting for the food to arrive, Sally asked lots of question about what was going on and Shawn didn’t say much. He just naturally took the roses out and knee down to propose to Sally.

Sally was super shocked and surprised for what Shawn did today. It was so sweet of Shawn to plan this. She didn’t expect Shawn to propose to her at Marina Bay Sands. She always thought that Shawn brought her here because it was an unusual place that they had their dating. They really spent the night well with each other and of course more things to prepare for their big day.